Strong Water Sixth Stanza

What comforts her is others loving

her equally for the strength and for the weakness

from which it issues, lightning from a cloud.

Lightning stuns. In rain, the clouds disperse.

Only water of connection remains,

flowing through us. Strong is what we make

each other. Until we are all strong together,

a strong woman is a woman strongly afraid.

This is my page spread reflection on the sixth stanza of Marge Piercy's poem, For Strong Women.

Strong Wind Fifth Stanza

A strong woman is a woman who craves love

like oxygen or she turns blue choking.

A strong woman is a woman who loves

strongly and weeps strongly and is strongly

terrifed and has strong needs. A strong woman is strong

in words, in action, in connection, in feeling;

she is not strong as a stone but as a wolf

suckling her young. Strength is not in her, but she

enacts it as the wind fills a sail.

This is my page spread reflection on the fifth stanza of Marge Piercy's poem, For Strong Women.
 
 

Scars Fourth Stanza

A strong woman is a woman bleeding

inside. A strong woman is a woman making

herself strong every morning while her teeth

loosen and her back throbs. Every baby,

a tooth, midwives used to say, and now

every battle a scar. A strong woman

is a mass of scar tissue that aches

when it rains and wounds that bleed

when you bump them and memories that get up

in the night and pace in boots to and fro.

This is my page spread reflection on the fourth stanza of Marge Piercy's poem, For Strong Women. 

Determined Stanza Three

A strong woman is a woman determined

to do something others are determined

not be done. She is pushing up on the bottom

of a lead coffin lid. She is trying to raise

a manhole cover with her head, she is trying

to butt her way through a steel wall.

Her head hurts. People waiting for the hole

to be made say, hurry, you’re so strong.

This is my page spread reflection on the third stanza of Marge Piercy's poem, For Strong Women.

Death Second Stanza

A strong woman is a woman in whose head

a voice is repeating, I told you so,

ugly, bad girl, bitch, nag, shrill, witch,

ballbuster, nobody will ever love you back,

why aren’t you feminine, why aren’t

you soft, why aren’t you quiet, why

aren’t you dead?

This is my page spread reflection on the second stanza of Marge Piercy's poem, For Strong Women. 

Straining with Tears First Stanza

A strong woman is a woman who is straining.

A strong woman is a woman standing

on tiptoe and lifting a barbell

while trying to sing Boris Godunov.

A strong woman is a woman at work

cleaning out the cesspool of the ages,

and while she shovels, she talks about

how she doesn’t mind crying, it opens

the ducts of the eyes, and throwing up

develops the stomach muscles, and

she goes on shoveling with tears

in her nose.

This is the page spread that I did as my reflection on the first stanza of the poem For Strong Women by Marge Piercy.

For Strong Women

This altered book represents my reflection on the poem, For Strong Women by Marge Piercy. Each page spread is a contemplative art reflection on one stanza of the poem. Here you see the cover and the inside of the cover.

I created the cover with a strap that fastens so that the book would be completely closed. This felt right because the interior of the book felt personal and vulnerable. 

I will post each spread with its proper stanza and in the order of the poem. I hope you enjoy the poem and my artistic reflection of each of the stanzas.